When you create a product, always put the best product out… take your time, review and edit. There should be no reason this movie should have been released in this form. From inconsistent sound to horrible camera angles.
You can get quality cinematography from an iPhone, invest in yourself by investing in adequate equipment, once you purchase, take classes on sound mixing and camera angles. Once you have the visuals then take time to flesh out your script.
No one will take you serious until you take yourself serious, do better.