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First Comes Desire Paperback – February 7, 2017
Tina Donahue (Author) Find all the books, read about the author, and more. See search results for this author |
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- Print length202 pages
- LanguageEnglish
- PublisherLyrical Press
- Publication dateFebruary 7, 2017
- Dimensions5.5 x 0.51 x 8.5 inches
- ISBN-101516100654
- ISBN-13978-1516100651
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- Publisher : Lyrical Press (February 7, 2017)
- Language : English
- Paperback : 202 pages
- ISBN-10 : 1516100654
- ISBN-13 : 978-1516100651
- Item Weight : 9.3 ounces
- Dimensions : 5.5 x 0.51 x 8.5 inches
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I’m an Amazon and international bestselling novelist who writes passionate romance for every taste – ‘heat with heart’ – for traditional publishers and indie. Booklist, Publisher’s Weekly, Romantic Times and numerous online sites have praised my work. I’ve won Readers’ Choice Awards, was named a finalist in the EPIC competition, received a Book of the Year award, The Golden Nib Award, awards of merit in the RWA Holt Medallion competitions, and second place in the NEC RWA contests. I’m featured in the Novel & Short Story Writer’s Market. Before penning romances, I worked at a major Hollywood production company in Story Direction.
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I struggled to finish this book, it was not what I was expecting and the first half of the book read like a really bad script for a low budget porn film. It does get marginally better in the second half of the book, but the nicest thing I can say about this book is that the cover is lovely.
If you have ever read any of my reviews, you know I don't mind sex, even graphic sex in the books I read, in fact I love a steamy book, but in those books, the sex enhances the story - it isn't the story. In this book I felt like it was all about the sex, with some other stuff happening. There was so much potential; a jealous ex-lover, exotic location, pirates, reunited siblings, but none of these really came to the forefront. I found the "relationship" between Tristian and Diana to be totally unbelievable, the writing lacking and the "plot" basically non existent.
I gave this book two stars, one for the cover (which is awesome) and one because some of the prose actually made me laugh out loud (which I am sure was NOT the author's intent) but really "his meaty balls"? "his beefy rod"? I laughed so hard I had tears running down my face.
Based on the other reviews, I am in the minority here and that is fine, to each his own, but this book was not for me and I doubt I will read another by this author.
Tristan Kent is no gentleman. Born into deep poverty, he went to sea an illiterate boy, just looking for some way to survive. Now, years later, he captains the pirate ship Lady Lark, cruising the warm waters of the Indian Ocean and relieving the merchant vessels he encounters of their wealth. If Tristan were to return to his native England, he’d hang.
Still, he’s no villain either. Unlike his crew, he’s never gets drunk. A natural leader, he’s firm but fair with the often desperate and unsavory men he commands, avoiding bloodshed unless there’s no alternative. He’s unfailingly loyal to his friends. Over the years, he has educated himself far better than many of his more fortunate countrymen. He speaks half a dozen languages and reads The Iliad for entertainment.
He’s also stunningly handsome, breathtakingly virile, and has a wicked sense of humor.
Diana Fletcher might be a woman, but she hardly qualifies as the weaker sex. Motherless, brow-beaten by her cold-hearted minister father, Diana has learned to take care of herself, as well as her younger brother Peter. She’s smart, stubborn, outspoken and far more independent-minded than is considered appropriate for females in eighteenth century England. After her father dies, Peter falls into the clutches of a band of pirates. Diana’s ready to do anything to save him. That includes selling her body to her father’s unscrupulous friend Deacon Bishop in return for a ship and men to help her search for her hapless sibling.
Of course, the black-haired, violet-eyed virgin is incredibly beautiful, even when she’s wearing the rough canvas and homespun of a mariner.
When Diana and her crew capture the sleeping Tristan on a tropical beach, he’s more amused than concerned. He turns the tables and takes her prisoner, even as he explains that he has saved rather than enslaved Peter. But truly it is Tristan who has given up his freedom, losing his heart to the feisty preacher’s daughter. He makes up his mind that she’ll be his wife—and somewhat surprisingly, she agrees. Though she hardly trusts him, being wed to a handsome, attentive and sexy pirate is clearly preferable to becoming the mistress of a disgusting, corrupt man who’s her father’s age.
First Comes Desire is labeled as historical erotic romance. I’d consider fantasy erotic romance to be a more appropriate description. The action unfolds on an idyllic tropical island inhabited by a tight-knit community of friendly natives who normally run around half-naked. Her sensuality awakened by Tristan’s expert love-making, Diana soon sheds her modesty. Aside from Tristan’s possessive chauvinism, the attitudes of the characters all seem very modern. There’s little historical detail—in fact, I’m just guessing at the time period, based on Wikipedia’s article about the history of Madagascar.
Not that this really matters. The book is great fun, with its lusty hero and contrary heroine, not to mention several incredibly evil villains. The sex scenes throw off so many sparks they threatened to short out my e-reader, although Ms. Donahue’s choice of terminology struck me as a bit coy at times—especially when the hero introduces his formerly virginal bride to anal sex almost immediately after she surrenders her maidenhead. Never mind. The attraction between Tristan and Diana, sudden though it may be, is the most believable part of the novel. Their love also rings true, developing more gradually as they learn to trust one another.
The plot—not so much. I found many aspects implausible, including the initial premise. In particular, I couldn’t really imagine how a man with Tristan’s experience and intelligence would not have understood the threat posed by his discarded mistress. He also seemed blithely unconcerned about being followed to his island paradise by his murderous crew. I suppose he might have been blinded by love.
Diana’s a delightful character, torn between her conservative upbringing and her freedom she finds, paradoxically, in being bound to Tristan as his wife. There’s a definite BDSM vibe to their relationship that kink-lovers will find arousing. Tristan claims Diana in a very literal way. He insists that she satisfy him sexually however he desires. Not that she protests, of course. Once again, this is a fantasy (with some Gorean overtones), the seductive idea of being owned by your lover.
If you enjoy erotic romance featuring a gorgeous, noble he-man and his devoted woman, willing to give up their lives for one another—while taking frequent breaks for carnal activities—you’ll love First Comes Desire. Just don’t expect much in the way of history!
The premise of a sister looking for her brother and willing to do what needs to be done at all costs is a noble introduction to the conflict. Diana’s surprise comes from underestimating a pirate, especially if he’s highly intelligent, cunning, canny and astonishingly handsome. Tristan is all that plus more. The fact that he disconcerts, flusters and unnerves her makes Diana all the more determined to see Tristan hang for abducting her little brother. The fun comes from the hero’s point of view. Diana has no idea what plans he has for her and the lengths he’ll go to seduce her but, as a reader is seeing into both their heads, the outcome is quite apparent. The heroine is about to be delightfully and thoroughly compromised in a way only a pirate can get away with.
Erotic romance readers will find the usual array of sensual attacks on Diana’s senses effective, titillating and well written. There is some light bondage but I don’t classify it as BDSM, it’s just Tristan being a pirate and subduing the heroine’s feisty, contrary behavior. He utilizes every part of Diana’s body in an erotic attack that leaves the heroine breathless and awakened and aware of her body as never before. Readers know once that happens, once passion is unleashed, there’s no going back. Get ready to be satisfied.
Now comes the tough part, explaining the difference between me, a long time romance reader, and a newbie just dipping their toes into erotic romance. For new readers, this book should be a solid winner because it covers a favorite topic – pirates. It allows a woman to feel okay with a dominate man who does forceful and decadent things to get his way just because he is a pirate. The Dom/Sub aspect is definitely there even though this isn’t that kind of subgenre; it’s just Tristan’s nature to want to subdue a worthy opponent but wanting something far more, her trust and willingness to concede. There is an exciting conflict and a suspenseful, action filled conclusion that had a surprising resolution for some of the combatants. All of that works. However, from my perspective, I was disappointed because I recognized every pirate trope I’ve ever read crammed into this novel. I knew what was going to happen and who was going to cause trouble and how it was going to play out and a general idea as to who would get their comeuppance and even how it would happen just because of how those characters were written. In that, the book was predictable, formulaic and a trial to get through and I was disappointed. Don’t get me wrong, this novel is very well written and put together, and the erotic scenes definitely worked, but I’m too jaded by years of reading to be surprised at any of the plot/conflict points explored here because I had the feeling of been there/read that, and bought the book one too many times to get amazed by the turn of events. So please take this paragraph as an endorsement for fresh new eyes to the romance genre because I think they’ll enjoy First Comes Desire tremendously. For readers like me, unless you have a craving for manly pirates, and are in the mood for a predictable format, this might be a nice bit of sexy escapism to pass the time with but doesn’t come with any intriguing twists, shocks or unusual kinks.
All that being said, the author took some time to write a lengthy, meaty plot to couch the sex within and I found that to be a strong plus for this novel. I also appreciated how Diana had to come to grips with all the changes in her little brother, who wasn’t little any longer. I liked the solid friendship between Tristan and his friend, James. I also think that the author did an excellent job of depicted the pirates as nasty villains and effective stirrers of the plot conflict. Ms. Donahue convinced me that they were decidedly distasteful beings.
On the whole, First Comes Desire has a lot to offer readers who adore saucy, virile pirate heroes who lust after women who eventually bring out the noble men inside of them, much to their astonishment and consternation. Diana smooths Tristan’s rough edges as much as he unleashes the sensual, wild and passionate woman inside of her. The two of them are good together and the novel does conclude with a satisfying happy-ever-after that ties into the book’s title quite cleverly. I suspect a lot of readers are going to really enjoy this story and be happy they read it.
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