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No, seriously. This is a SHORT story.
Reviewed in the United States on June 12, 2019
Take seriously the description "short story." I have read short stories that were longer than this. So do understand that you are paying $4 and some change for something that will be over and done with in a few minutes' time. With that being said, short stories can be great -- I'm just not entirely sure I thought this one was.
I'd love to see the same themes explored here developed into a full-length novel -- and surely they could be. Instead, rather than a narrative that has a clear beginning, this seems more like a snapshot of a random time in the story. (Though it does have a pretty definitive end.) And while I'm not squeamish about sex, there's a LOT of sex here -- maybe overmuch for such a short piece when some of that time could have been used in describing the title character's thoughts.