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Into the Labyrinth: Mage Errant Book 1 Kindle Edition
John Bierce (Author) Find all the books, read about the author, and more. See search results for this author |
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When a very unusual mage does choose him as apprentice, however, his life starts to take a sharp turn for the better. Now all he has to worry about is the final test for the first years- being sent into the terrifying labyrinth below Skyhold.
(If you’re looking for the Into the Labyrinth audiobook, please check out the listing for the combined publisher’s pack edition of books 1 and 2 at https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07W86D2VY.)
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateOctober 8, 2018
- File size4196 KB
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- ASIN : B07J675X2C
- Publication date : October 8, 2018
- Language : English
- File size : 4196 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 216 pages
- Page numbers source ISBN : 1731550944
- Lending : Enabled
- Best Sellers Rank: #1,963 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #26 in Coming of Age Fantasy (Books)
- #36 in Coming of Age Fantasy eBooks
- #47 in Sword & Sorcery Fantasy eBooks
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About the author

John Bierce is a history buff, fantasy and science fiction lover, and fan of talking about himself in the third person. He also has a background in the earth sciences, and has been caught licking rocks before. For science.
John has also walked face first into automatic doors on multiple occasions. It's a real talent.
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Ok, that was a short list, wasn't it? The fact of the matter is, this was a very good book, first effort or otherwise. This is not high fantasy, or epic, or world altering literature. It is a very serviceable YA coming of age story that touches on some themes of loneliness and social ineptitude that occasionally hit a little too close to home. There are fun moments, and although you know the author has plans for a series, a few moments towards the end that just might turn out very badly for one or more of the main characters.
I can't in good conscious rate this book at five stars - there were no scenes that gave me goosebumps or made me wonder at the amazing turn of events. I do however feel that in a world of one, two, and three star books, the occasional four star is exemplary, and only a few small steps from being among the absolute best there is. To that end, there were some textual errors. Some of the other reviews now out have mentioned those, and I have seen a comment from the author on a public forum that he is correcting them and uploading a fixed edition for all future readers. Otherwise, this is a fun, light, quick book, and once I started I was inclined to hurry up and finish the story so I could bask in the warm glow of finishing a good book.
Maybe the only questions now: Where do we go now that we have been "Into the Labyrinth," and how long do we have to wait for more of Hugh and his friends?
For those of us who number among the prudes:
Profanity was very light. There was one scene of heated anger towards the end with coarse language that didn't appear anywhere else.
Sex was not mentioned or even intimated.
Violence was light to medium. There were monsters exploding with ichor, and most of the main characters took wounds of one sort or another in the course of combat towards the end of the book. Also there are a few scenes of bullying against the protagonist.
His mana reserves are big though. A shame he can’t cast any spells. Magical academies expect it from a student.
To Hugh’s surprise, an Errant Librarian Mage chooses him and two other unpromising students as his apprentices. They learn to trust each other and develop arcane skills. Who knows, maybe they’re not a group of losers?
Into the Labyrinth relies heavily on tropes. A country bumpkin tries to find his place in a magical academy where he’s bullied. He doesn’t realise how special he is until an eccentric teacher tutors him and unblocks his potential. He discovers people can like him and finds his inner strength.
For coming of age fantasy, it’s as formulaic as it gets. On the other hand, tight, straightforward plot and likeable (but underdeveloped) characters entertained me. I felt motivated to turn the pages and learn more about their adventures.
A complex magic system deserves praise and will appeal to hard magic systems’ enthusiasts. An interesting bestiary of creatures available for contract added much colour to the world although it felt a bit like a filler.
Characters, especially secondary ones, remain underdeveloped and lack complexity. Observing Hugh gaining confidence made me feel good, but he still has a lot of work to do. A school bully is just that - a jerk. Of course, he comes from a noble family and is crazily talented - I would say we’ve all seen it. Probably million times.
The writing feels utilitarian and flat, but it delivers the story well and makes it easily accessible. Another pass, or two, of editing, would clear the typos and overused words (everyone grins in this book. All the time). It would give ItL the feel of a finished product.
All said, the book is short and entertaining. It has flaws, but also some charm. I think it’ll do as a palate cleanser between longer / more complex books.
That Moment.
That Moment gets five stars from me, always. You might be thinking, 'but what if the rest is trash?' There's no way a trash book can produce that Moment.
Weird note: I'm actually not taking about the big reveal at the end. I liked that, but not the one I mean 😄
On to book two!
What would I change? Sometimes I felt like I was being told what the main character was feeling rather than being shown. I wish there was more time spent on descriptions: I was able to picture the library but not much else in the school.
Overall, this was a refreshing take on the "magic school" trope and I look forward to the rest of the series, which hopefully continues soon.
Top reviews from other countries

This novel, the first in the Mage Errant series, is largely the story of Hugh of Emblin. He's a shy, awkward student who struggles with his lessons. Here we follow him on his journey to learn skills and self belief, and make friends along the way.
The characters are very easy to like (or dislike in the case of antagonists), and though they're not necessarily particularly nuanced, I found the band of friends easy to relate to (as I'm sure anyone who was a bit of an outcast will) and enjoyable to read about.
The plot is easy to follow but had enough little twists and cool ideas to keep me interested. The book is composed of relatively short chapters that always leave you wanting to read just a few more pages of the next chapter.
This isn't a book for those wanting something dark, heavy, nuanced, mind blowing or full of intrigue. There were also a few typos throughout. But for those wanting an easy read about likeable characters finding themselves, set in a world with some cool little bits of world building, and especially for people who like magic school stories, this is a very easy recommendation and I'll definitely be getting around to the rest of the series.

A magic school story mixed with epic fantasy where the character grows in power and ability is very much up my street, and a comfortable, fun fantasy that tears along at a good pace is just what I wanted to immerse myself in. The magic is interesting and varied, as are the characters, monsters and enemies they face. It's just good entertainment, and it's great to read something a little lighter than my normal fare, especially right now.

Really enjoyed this book. Gave a slight harry potter feeling, with magic and academy life etc but distinct enough that it felt like a new story and not a wannabe remake (apart from the snobbish, blond, rich, sneering nemesis with the two lackeys reminiscent of Malfoy). Loved the imaginative approach to spell crafting and magic in general and descriptive fight scenes, effects and general character progression. Would have wished the books were a tad longer as I didnt want the adventure to stop. Maybe a bit more on the lower levels of the labyrinth?

