Top critical review
Great story and action. Too many side-tracks
Reviewed in the United States on September 15, 2021
Until this book, I always gave five stars because I love the scenario, characters, etc. I'm finally fed up with so many side-tracks, especially when they happen in the middle of the great action. Is it your own ADHD, your way of portraying Talker as a low attention-span coffee addict, or your editor was like, "We needb18 more pages and I don't care if it is fluff/filler?"
Don't get me wrong, shallow stories like this need all the character development they can get! It's the TIMING!