One word for the Wickham sisters – BOUNDARIES! Holy cow! Seriously, who waits outside the door while their cousins are having sex and then slips a note under the door asking what the sex was like? Oh my friggin’ goddess! These are supposed to be adult women, not high schoolers. It wasn’t funny in Rebecca’s story and it’s not funny in this story, and I haven’t cracked open Paisley’s story yet but I’m certain it won’t be funny there either. Lose the Wickham sisters. And I’m a little tired of Scarlet’s blog posts, if they can be called that. Her arrogance is trying my last nerve. The only funny part of those was the accidental text Madden sent to Keller.
This story didn’t really grab me the way Rebecca’s story did. I actually found myself falling asleep in some parts because it dragged on for so long. I like that it’s a longer book but it’s long for the wrong reasons. Some parts were too short, others were too long, and some parts seemed like they didn’t really need to be there. And I’m still suggesting Celia Kyle hire an editor. There were a few typos and some scenes didn’t make sense. In one scene Lorelei is cut and bled by a couple of werewolves but we don’t get any mention of the blades appearing or who is holding the blades. We just get that the blades cut her and we don’t know where they cut her. I’m going to assume it was on the shoulders were Zeke and Dylan later bit her but there’s no way to be sure.
Which comes to my next issue with this story. Zeke made me giggle. He was such a stinker, but a sweet stinker. I would love to bend him over the bed, or my knee, and get after him with my riding crop. Dylan was sweet but he didn’t seem all that special to me. I guess he was meant to be the adult while Zeke was the kid. Even their names seemed a little cliché in that area. The picture on the book cover features one man with a tattoo but nothing was mentioned about who had the tattoo in the book. Would have been nice so we could have known what the tattoo said, unless the pictures are just eye candy. If they’re just eye candy then why bother? I’d have also liked to know what color Zeke’s hair was. I kept leaning toward light brown or dark brown close to black like Berke’s hair. I also pictured Dylan with brown eyes or blue eyes. There’s no mention of his eye color.
Steamy sex scenes as usual, literally in this case. Nice little kinky bits but it felt a little vanilla. Zeke and Dylan reference verbally and internally that Lorelei seems to like a little pain but there didn’t seem to be too much other than the biting where they claim her.
I did like Lorelei. She’s sweet, funny and fierce. Although I wish she hadn’t lost her gun so quickly. It would have been fun to read her holding Zeke and Dylan at gun point for interrogation purposes or other things. I kind of would have liked to read her firing a shot at Zeke for lying to her about taking her to see Dylan and not Rebecca first. Also how is it that the Twynham sisters are so much more mature than the Wickham sisters are? I read the Wickham sisters’ stories and I want to drive a nail into my head but I read the Twynham sisters’ stories – the stories I’ve read so far - and I feel happy and giggly inside. Couldn’t Celia have just scrapped the Wickhams – save for Whitney. I like Whitney - and made it all about the Twynhams? They’re so much more interesting.
That being said, I am still waiting for the unanswered questions of how the women mating with these werewolves are not turned into werewolves themselves and how the werewolves born to these human women are not hybrid werewolves. I also want to know more about the Warden Born and the existence of werewolves, if their existence is purely biological or biological with supernatural hints. There’s only so much a reader can interpret. Hopefully they’ll be answered in Paisley’s story but I don’t have high hopes
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Not great but still a lot better than the Wickham sisters’ stories (This review may contain spoilers)
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