This isn’t a badly written book, but I honestly really didn’t care what happened to the characters, as I pretty much assumed the books outcome from the start and I was correct. There was no real thrill or danger and most of the book was a long road trip. I couldn’t understand how a 28 year old woman thought her dad could pay for everything on an FBI salary. So right off the bat I assumed the dad was dirty. The twist would have been him not being dirty. Also it’s never explained how the bad guys tracked the fleeing couple so freaking easily too. But then again the book does have continuity issues even characters names are switched in a chapter. For me this book was not worth the $5.99 I paid, it was more of a borrow type book.