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Reviewed in the United States on May 16, 2021
These are really good stories. I read both anthologies and enjoyed them all. However. Editing needs to be much tighter. Every book has instances of words left out of sentences, spellchecker errors, & sloppy plotting or continuity. For example, Tony worries throughout his book about the copper tipped arrows & is surprised when they work on a non-cat, when on pg 6310 Kiki states that they become the bane of whoever they're used against. On 9582, the King places "one heart" on his chest, obviously a spellchecker error for 'hand,' based on the context. Bianca gives herself insulin yet nearly dies minutes later because she doesn't have her insulin until Horace saves her, in the street kidnapping episode.
Please tighten up your editing!
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