The narrative is okay, and I liked the characters. The idea for the plot was I intriguing. I feel the writing was sort of clunky. Also, when I come across mistakes, I’m pulled out of the story and into the real world. This author does not know the difference between compliment/complement. She also wrote “per say” rather than the correct “per se.” There are things written later in the book that don’t match up with things written at the beginning. Just so-so.