Customer Review

Reviewed in the United States on August 29, 2021
I don't know if Jerry ever read them, but I've left pretty tough reviews of his books since the first- the stories are amazing, but his dialogue was... embarrassing. It didn't seem to improve for a long time...
Finally, he got it sorted! Dialogue is relaxed and natural, for the most part. Much more enjoyable to read, without all of the cringing.

I have to leave one criticism, or I'd feel like I was cheating him .
I'm not sure using "Boss" as a title was a wise starts reading like a 1930s gangster movie script.

But that's minor and just my little opinion.

Great Job, Jerry. Loved it!
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