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VELVET VELVET VELVET
Reviewed in the United States on December 21, 2020
Ms. Hannah is an extremely prolific author.
In the last several books she constantly describes things as velvet (velvet lake,voice, moon, skin, sky, day, blah, blah,
I find her overuse of this one word beyond annoying and a cop-out.
In the first chapter, she already used the same description twice. Therefore, I requested a refund and Angels Falls was deleted. I felt velvety. : )
I've pre-ordered her next book due out in February. The first time I encounter her overuse of the same
word, I'm going to request a refund.
Her proofreader should be fired. Perhaps, I should be hired.
I promise to have a more extensive vocabulary.
Sorry, Ms. Hannah. Someone had to tell you.
Otherwise, your stories are amazing.