Top critical review
Terrible - no depth, underdeveloped plot and characters
Reviewed in the United States on July 12, 2019
This book was terrible, boring, no depth. The writing was infantile, as though written for a child to read...e.g.,"they went to the park, they ate good food, they had fun and went home." My tween children write with more adjectives and descriptions than this "author". UGH. This writer needs to learn how to truly develop a plot and the characters within to draw the reader in. The editing was terrible - so many frustrating mistakes, "Kristen was talking to Kristen"...huh? I wouldn't have finished it if I hadn't paid for it. I will not read another of her books - a total waste of time and brain cells.