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The Battle of Verril (Book of Deacon, 3)

The Battle of Verril (Book of Deacon, 3)

byJoseph R. Lallo
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Vicky Kae
4.0 out of 5 starsConsistent Finale of Trilogy
Reviewed in the United States on February 11, 2014
In this final book of three, the Chosen unite to work against the events set in place with the D'Karon generals' evil takeover of the Northern Alliance and its kingdom. All the Chosen are captured and separated as the generals prepare for the opening of a portal that will provide them with the goal they've planned for centuries. As a Chosen and as a traitor, Myranda is tested similarly to knights of old in an arena with contests ending in life or death, each feat involving an opponent created from magic and possessing abilities designed to defeat even the most able of contestants. As she battles against dragoyles, deadly worms and a gigantic dragon, the other four Chosen are secreted from each other and Deacon, a wise wizard, is also captured and is interrogated---offered to perhaps join the generals and provide them with some of the wisdom the generals might find handy.

The many hints provided in the first two books find resolution in this final novel, and the Chosen must put all the information together to satisfy the prophecy and provide the peace as predicted so many years before. Both horrors and wonders are revealed, and both deaths and lives are revealed. Readers will find this final book to be as enthralling as the first two.

While The Battle of Verril continues the excellent story, the editorial issues continue--but, again, they do not detract from the larger story. While the conclusion provides resolution for the most obvious issues, there are other matters that remain in limbo--particularly in areas such as Entwell and its characters--and, of course, the origin of Desmares and how his character develops with the conclusion of this trilogy (why does the author have him collecting his weapons?). This reader also questions, with all the languages that the various wizards, generals, magicians, priests and others not only encounter but are able to individually interpret--logically inferring that they are not necessarily dead languages--where do these other languages originate and, more importantly, because they involve magic, what effect are they having on the world that Caya is now ruling?

Lallo has written a trilogy and left room for more. Borrowing from the theater, this author has been able to complete the work and left his audience wanting more.
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JP
3.0 out of 5 starsWhat a Mess!
Reviewed in the United States on March 4, 2014
Story: 4 stars
Telling: 2 stars

As with most self published books, there are typos and formatting errors, but
I can forgive those for a good story. This is a good story, but the telling
is a mess. There are no chapter breaks. There are occasional breaks
between the paragraphs, but they seem purely arbitrary, and sometimes I
think they may be just a formatting error.

The story is told in the third person omniscient, with each paragraph often
centering on a different character. There are even some paragraphs which
switch from one character to another part way through.

There are some paragraphs where someone is speaking, but the speaker is not
identified, and the proceeding paragraph is about one character, while the
following paragraph is about another character, so you have to guess who the
speaker was. Since each paragraph can jump around, the speaker might not
be the focus of either the proceeding or the following paragraph.

The main heroine (described as being in her twenties) is often referred to as
"the girl" or "the hero" or "the wizard". Since there are multiple
'wizards' and 'heroes' when the character is referred to as such, you have
to assume the character being described is the same one from the preceding
paragraph. If a character is not human, elvish or dwarvish, they are
usually referred to as a "creature" (or sometimes "beast") -- even if they
are sentient and even if they are one of the "good guys".

I personally prefer stories told in the first person. Third person is
usually fine if there is still focus on one character at a time.

Third person books are fine as long as we only delve into the mind of one
character per chapter, or at least section of a chapter. This book is just
an incoherent mess, which is unfortunate because I did like the story.
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Peggy G. Wheeler
1.0 out of 5 stars Unexplained alien monsters taking over earth/earthlings. UGH!
Reviewed in the United States on November 14, 2014
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I read all three books in this series and should have stopped after the first one. That is truly the only one I liked. This last one was non-ending battle after battle after battle after battle, etc. I keep a listing of authors that I enjoy reading and ones that I don't. This author is on my never again listing. I have been a book lover my entire life and have stumbled onto some really good books. This time I just stumbled period.
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Michael
1.0 out of 5 stars Poor writing and predictable story line
Reviewed in the United States on December 11, 2015
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I was drawn into this series in the first book but books 2 and 3 drastically went downhill. The writing is average at best and often poor or bad. The battle scenes are all the same; heroes face overwhelming odds and flight until all their energy is expended. Then they miraculously find extra strength and escape their enemies. The dialogue is also juvenile and all the characters are static. I finished this series primarily because I am stubborn and nothing more.
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Gunter
1.0 out of 5 stars Bad. Just Bad
Reviewed in the United States on September 24, 2012
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I tried to like this trilogy, but just couldn't. The biggest frustration with it is that I just didn't care about the main characters or the world they were trying to save. I felt like it had potential, but it never came close to realizing it. What was the south like? Who were the people in Entwell and why did they sit idly by while the world was being destroyed? Who were the D'karon? Why did the D'karon want the world? If you'd like the answers to these questions DON'T READ THIS BOOK. Save yourself $3.
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SingleDad
1.0 out of 5 stars E for effort
Reviewed in the United States on June 28, 2012
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This book lost my interest after the first 100 typos. Unfortunately this was in the first 30 pages. Seems to me you only want my money but not willing to offer me a service worthy of my dollar dollar bills.
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jrmiller
1.0 out of 5 stars Bad ending
Reviewed in the United States on July 21, 2013
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This series started out ok but managed to turn ridiculous and incoherent. Don't waste your money. Bad bad bad bad.
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Linda
1.0 out of 5 stars Price change at moment of purchase
Reviewed in the United States on September 4, 2017
i got the first book free. I like it enough to spend 2.99 on the second book. I liked that one well enough to purchase the third for 2.99.the moment I clicked the buy now button, the price changed from 2.99 to 4.99. Pretty rotten tactic. Needless to say, I did not continue with this purchase. Even though I liked the story well enough to continue, I am too disgusted with what just happened. A cliffhanger is acceptable. A pricing change I the middle of a purchase is not! I no longer care how the story ends.
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MO
1.0 out of 5 stars Disappointing, like the last two...
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on August 4, 2013
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Author didn't allow the characters to develop or have any depth. The storyline was interesting but the characters weren't. Outcomes of the battles, including Lain's was predictable.
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