Top positive review
Great stories, flawed layout
Reviewed in the United States on February 23, 2018
I have no complaints with the writing at all. I enjoyed both stories immensely. They were interesting and well written, with characters I cared about and great lessons.
My problem with these books is the way they were presented, at least in electronic format. Within a chapter, there are jumps in time and or between the character highlighted. There is no visual cue that this is happening, however, so as I read along, engrossed in the story, I would suddenly realize that things had changed. It was unpleasant and disconcerting, and could be resolved by something as simple as an additional space between lines.