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Reviewed in the United States on May 9, 2017
I have to mention several typos first. Are these ever proof read?
2nd. How did Marin become so physically powerful and fast for a physics scientist.
Why did Pierce not just shoot him in the head after he killed his daughter? How did Marin easily handle 9mm hits at point blank range on his bullet proof vest? This guy was Superman?
Why would the protagonist believe a stranger calling to warn her about Eric make her suddenly go back to distrusting Eric?
Finally, what kind of mind can dream up so many sadistic scenarios?
However, I kept reading just to see how Marin would meet his end.