Top positive review
Great character and story, but full of technical errors
Reviewed in the United States on August 6, 2019
Mark is a great story teller, but seriously sir, you really need to get a competent person to review and edit for spelling and technical accuracy.
One passage talks about fuses to an electrical torture device "shorting out." Fuses ARE electrical "shorts" so-to-speak. When the fail, they "open."
In another passage "breaks" are applied in a vehicle. The correct spelling is "brakes."
In yet another passage about a Eurocopter the bad guy is "jacking the collective left and right." That would be the cyclic. The collective controls the main rotor blade pitch. Us helo pilots call collective the "up-down-go faster stick."
All in all, a great read though