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... dismayed at how many reviewers think the writing is good. The writing is what is driving me crazy
Reviewed in the United States on March 2, 2017
I'm a little dismayed at how many reviewers think the writing is good. The writing is what is driving me crazy! Patrick thought this, and then Patrick turned around, and Patrick said.... the same name is used again three or four times in the same paragraph. Pronouns! Grasp the concept! Or perhaps there are even other ways to indicate Patrick is still the focus, such as; "The sheriff," or, "her boss..." And please, when the scene changes, put a blank line in or something. The kindle edition I have doesn't do that. One moment we're on the mountain and the next we're flashing back to a year ago, and there is no break to indicate we're switching scenes. Perhaps this is some of the poor editing referred to by several reviewers. I can only assume that loyal fans are basing their 5 star reviews on previous books. There are several accounts that mention something to the effect, "...but this one is not as good as her others." And then they go on to give it 5 stars. The plot is interesting but a little draggy, so I'll give it 2 stars, but I'm wondering if after finishing half of the book I even WANT to finish it. Sorry. I just don't care for it.