Top critical review
Good story, enjoyable series.
Reviewed in the United States on March 13, 2016
I have been very much enjoying this series, I listen to them during my commute. It's a good story set in a well fleshed out universe. I have a couple of minor constructive critiques for the author, though. 1: the main characters are a bit underdeveloped for the ninth episode in the series, I have been looking forward to more background and deeper levels of interaction. 2: the redundancy of the lines e.g. " resistance fighters" here:
"The first resistance fighter pulled a key from his pocket and unlocked the door, swinging it open. “I got it!” he announced. The second resistance fighter ducked through the doorway, and another one followed him. The third resistance fighter came charging down the street and headed for the open door. Synda’s mouth dropped open. “Tony?” she mumbled. The third resistance fighter glanced at Synda as he passed, a confused look on his face."
This is a recurring complaint of mine throughout the series, words like "hatch" and "platform" a dozen half dozen times in a single paragraph can be clunky. As well, a lack of abbreviation, acronyms or slang for things like "bio-digital plague" where simply "plague" or BDP might be less clunky.