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Continuity Issues Abound
Reviewed in the United States on July 4, 2021
Overall, I quite enjoyed the series as light summer reading, but there are some major continuity issues!
Book 1 has an ending that simply doesn't continue or even relate at all to Book 2.
Jeremy's eye colour changes several times. In Book 1 his eyes start out green, then somehow they are blue. In Book 2, his eyes are now brown only to become green again later.
Deanna states to Marcus that she does not like the c-word, then she uses it herself more than once in a pleasurable manner.
Deanna drives Jeremy's truck because she "hasn't driven in so long" but she actually drove two weeks prior to that.
Deanna refers to her lack of ass-kicking skills and to not having any muscle tone, and yet she thinks she can somehow strangle somebody to death -- which, in reality not only takes physical strength but it also takes several minutes.
She refers to Dr Derek alternately as being her psychologist or psychiatrist. They aren’t the same. Each of these professionals has a different educational background, training, and role in treatment.
"I would have patted myself on the back if it didn't interrupt my view." Seriously? you can, in fact, pat yourself on the back from several positions of either arm without interrupting your view.
I'm hoping for Book 4 and much better continuity!