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Started well but couldn't keep the story going.
Reviewed in the United States on January 6, 2018
Lost Loot of Lima - This is the first book I've read by this author and I was disappointed.
The book started well, using a better than average vocabulary, but quickly went down hill with lack of punctuation and improper word usage. The story flopped back and forth from interesting to down right unrealistic and even dumb in places. After trying to read this book over a three day period, I gave up after reading 49% of the story.
I will say in the beginning the history of the treasure and the diving were interesting, and so were the characters. Even though the author explained everything in detail, that didn't take away from the story; just made it wordy. Didn't care for the explicit sex.
Death Drones - After reading Lost Loot of Lima and only able to complete 49% of it, I tried to read Death Drones. I didn't finish the first chapter; I couldn't get into the story and found it silly. I volunteered to review this book and wasn't able to give it my best.