Top positive review
Doesn't reach your usual outstanding writing skills
Reviewed in the United States on February 16, 2021
This story was pretty good but not as outstanding as some.
Humor: 6/10 not enough. try putting a peticular comedy character in your stories or even just put in some jokes.
Grammar: 7/10 quite a few mistakes, compared to your other books.
Character/personality: 8/10 i think that there's potential for devdan.
Plot: 7/10 theres pretty much just devdan forgetting stuff and villages getting destroyed. the most eventful part wasnt even the climax.
creativity: 8/10 youve still got it good with what you come up with, especislly worla who always is really mean and tricky, but again just not quite as outstanding.
Total: 7.1/10 this was actually rather dissapointing compared to most of your books. I know it was one of your first, but it wasnt even that helpful since you tell this same story in the noob years, simply from different point of view. sadly not quite a five star.