Top critical review
1.0 out of 5 starsVery disappointed in this book when the author sells herself as an expert writer.
Reviewed in the United States on September 9, 2018
Bought this as a kindle book for my 3 year old grandson. Downloaded it on a desktop computer, an iPhone and an iPad. The book was so small it was almost unreadable and could not be resized or enjoyed on any sized device. The worst part of the book, however, was the author’s lack of skill when it comes to writing a story in rhyme. The rhyming was so bad even my grandson couldn’t take it. “ Who talks like that Grammy?” He said. “That hurts my ears!” Rhyme should be musical and have an easy natural flow. Not so in this book. I am deleting it off of my devices. I’m glad I didn’t pay $10.99 for it as I would be throwing it away.
