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3.0 out of 5 starsHeroine Needed More Spine
Reviewed in the United States 🇺🇸 on March 31, 2019
FINAL DECISION: I liked a lot about this book, but I felt the heroine was a weak personality. It took too long for her to take control of her life from her manipulative mother, by the time she did, I wanted a grander gesture.
THE STORY: Jada Brooks returns to Silver Springs with her daughter after her divorce. Twelve years after a youthful mistake tore apart her world and her family's, Jada is trying to do penance by caring for her ill mother and her disabled younger brother. What she doesn't expect is the return to town of Maddox Richardson -- the man she loved whose decisions helped destroy her family's world, and the man who unknowingly left her pregnant. Maddox has returned to Silver Springs as the head of the new girl's school in town. The decisions that led to the injuries to Jada's brother are something he still regrets and he doesn't want to bring any more pain to that family, but he has never been able to forget Jada.
OPINION: First what I liked about this book. There is a great message here about forgiveness and healing. Apart from the issues with the heroine that I discuss below, I would have really loved how these two have a second chance at love and are able to move beyond the past to grab it.The hero in this book is amazing. Maddox is a kind man who is working hard to make up for one mistake in his life that had serious and lifelong consequences. He has turned his life to something good and yet manages to care for his drug addicted mother and his brother who is getting out of prison. I found him caring and adult and sweet.Which made the heroine even harder to take at times.The heroine really annoyed me at times in this book. Her decision to keep the truth about her daughter's father from her and then state that she is doing it because she worried about her daughter rejecting her if she told the truth made me almost actively dislike her. She should care about what is best for her daughter. And that is the truth -- not what makes Jada's own life more convenient. In fact, Jada seems pretty week as a person. She is not a child; she is thirty years old and has a twelve year old. No matter her guilt over what happened, she doesn't seem to be able to be concerned about anything other than herself. It's like she is saying "Oh, please mom, please forgive me. I will sacrifice my life and my daughter's life if you will just love me more." I don't really respect her and it takes too long in this book for her to make any changes. By that time, I just didn't care anymore. I could only hope that Maddox found out the truth and would be able to show his daughter that people can care about their dysfunctional family and still have limits.I wanted to like this book more but I needed more from the heroine.
WORTH MENTIONING: There is an Easter Egg for fans of the Evelyn Talbot series.
CONNECTED BOOKS: UNFORGETTABLE YOU is the fifth book in the Silver Springs series. The romance is self-contained and thus this can be read as a standalone. There are some overlapping characters, but they are only background in this book.
STAR RATING: I give this book 3.5 stars.