Top critical review
Good concept poor writing style
Reviewed in the United States on August 15, 2018
His Model Son is a short story of an aging soldier on an island stricken with some sort of affliction that turns people into monsters. It is a side/extra story to the novel Keeper of Pulau Purba. I found the book difficult to follow as the sentence structure almost seemed to be translated from another language. The author uses the Protagonists name repeatedly in the book (annoyingly so), shifting from Third person to First person points of view with no warning. The story itself is an interesting concept but I couldn't really get into it because of the writing style. I do not know if this style was also used in the other novel, my review is for this short story only.
**I received this book for free in exchange for a review**