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A little less tamping down, please?
Reviewed in the United States on April 16, 2020
Likeable protagonists. The book feels like a director's cut - showing more than it needs to. Desperately needs a good line editor. Way too much tamping down by Alex, which even bleeds over into Jason's narrative. Alex is flat-out boring and stalled out, as is cat/Alfred, Eliza and the Hippie were fun. Pretty on the fence about reading on, even though I already own the sequels...