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As big of a mess as the first one.
Reviewed in the United States on November 18, 2018
I really went into this with an open mind as I had read the first one and considered it to be a mess but hoped the author would have either worked harder on book 2 or maybe hired a new editor. Sadly, he did not. Again, I found myself editing the book in my head as I read it as the sentence structure was all over the place and, frankly, it was juvenile. I will NOT be reading more books by this author as it seems he has not managed to learn from his previous mistakes. There can be so much more potential for this series.