Top critical review
3.0 out of 5 starsMissed opportunity & a better editor needed. Overall what you'd expect from an urban fantasy.
Reviewed in the United States 🇺🇸 on January 3, 2022
Great premise. Wish the story had focused on the girl and Jacky's life on the run and avoided the attraction alluding to a future romance in lieu of the story. Why the hell are you flirting when a child is in trouble? It would be the furthest thing from one's mind. The story started different than your typical urban fantasy, but ended in the way you would expect an urban fantasy novel with a female protagonist would end. Which is enjoyable for what it is. Just thought it was a missed opportunity. I'm not an expert or an English major, I certainly don't have the writing chops, yet I was able to spot quite a few glaring things that needed editing. Usually, I can easily overlook things like that. Those moments, took me out of the story. Banet needs a better editor. Overall, a fun read, but it could have been so much better.