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Just not a fan of the writing style
Reviewed in the United States 🇺🇸 on August 25, 2022
This book read more like the outline for a really good book. All of the elements were there but it just was not executed well. I don't care about minor typos but I do care about adverbs, fleshed out characters, and scene description. Again, it could just be the style of writing but to me this felt like a bullet pointed shot list Like someone wrote an outline but didn't fill in the paragraphs.
But again that could just be the style of writing because I've seen the same style with books like the Twilight. So if you like that type of book you might really enjoy this.