Top critical review
Great story, bad execution.
Reviewed in the United States on April 13, 2020
While I thoroughly loved this sweet story the author made so many plot mistakes it drove me crazy. The novel starts off with Sarah grocery shopping for her mom, dad, and her son. You find out a little later that her father is dead. What? She sees her best friend shopping at the same store and she's carrying 20 kilograms of potatoes! One of the characters lamented that they wouldn't be able to find a centimeter of space on the beach! Later, Rob used "inch". The story takes place in California! The car's bad suspension resembled jumping wallabies. What? Ms. Storm also changed the characters' ages three or four times, I lost track. Ms. Storm says she was born in New York; why the confusion with British/Australian English? This affectation nearly killed her story. Ms. Storm has nice stories to tell but needs professional help in proofreading and editing.