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Too wordy and preachy
Reviewed in the United States on August 6, 2020
Great characters and good adventures. Only this comes across more preachy. There is good talks of the Bible, but starts diving into sermon territory. Instead, introducing piece by piece, we are exposed to the whole part of salvation but not much more of before salvation stages or the after. The what happens after salvation and how to keep to the straight & narrow path of righteousness. Instead, of the process being described for the characters' experience - it became more a calling for the reader instead. Not thrilled about turning something fictional and fun reading into a sermon. If a gradual learning curb was in place or came across more realistic. Then I would buy this approach but as it stands. This book put me off. Like the author was not sure how to preach while telling the story.