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1.0 out of 5 starsNeeds editing!
Reviewed in the United States on July 23, 2020
This book review isn't on Neville's writing, but the editing of this book. This is the print version of the complete book set. It needs some editing, as there are some issues and I'm only at page 100 out of 500, so far.
So far, I'm seeing issues with "copy and paste". For example, page #12 where it talks about the grasshoppers, it is also again written in pages #38-39, which are now under two different books. At that point, I just thought that the author had wanted to re-iterate the story, but as I keep seeing this along the way, I know it's not the case.
On pages #99-102, it tells of the story of, "Daniel in the Lion's Den". Then you get to, "Fishing" on page #103 and it repeats the Daniel story word for word. And doesn't mention the, "Fishing" at all.
My book was published on July 12th 2020. I hope they'll edit it and try again. I do love the feel of the book in my hands. It has that nice velvet-like texture that I like and of course Neville is amazing. I'm not sure if it's worth returning the book though. So, I'm a bit bummed.
