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Interesting but no ending...
Reviewed in the United States on February 7, 2015
The book itself has an interesting plot and seems reasonably novel. So I will say that I found the characters were being developed appropriately. I did notice more grammar/missing words towards the end of the book. I can also overlook the "violations" of physics and motion that the author doesn't consider. The problem I have, and have found in more and more books lately, is that the author doesn't finish any main plots and leaves all the characters hanging. I don't mind the author wanting to create a series, rather, I enjoy most of them. But it is not OK to not finish a main story line. By the time the next book comes out, I won't remember any of the characters and in this case probably won't risk buying another book that doesn't end. You would have to recap a bunch in the next book so what is the point. Finish the plot in the book. The next book can continue with the basics... others authors have figured it out so, Rhett Bruno, you should too.