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Good book, bad editing
Reviewed in the United States on January 5, 2021
Once again, Mr. Partlow has written an entertaining and engaging book and neglected any attempt at editing. The story keeps the pages turning, the alien species are well developed, battle scenes are exciting, the science is interesting, and the pop culture references are much appreciated. However, as with all his other books, proper grammar and syntax are nearly nonexistent. Adjectives are used incessantly where adverbs are needed, “there’s” is frequently used to reference plural people, objects, places, etc, and improper personal pronouns are used before proper names, instead of at the end where they belong. The author needs to take a leave of absence, enroll in a remedial English writing course, and then return to writing after relearning the basics.