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Sloppy writing and apparently zero editing
Reviewed in the United States on April 6, 2020
I found this book really disappointing. I have enjoyed all the books in the Cowboy Dom series except this one. There were just too many sloppy mistakes. For instance, the villain keeps telling his brother not to go after the protagonist, but doesn't tell him that she has the evidence she has. Then the villain is hospitalized, and suddenly the brother (a cop) knows about the evidence and goes after her. Big plot hole. Then, in a matter of a couple pages the female is wearing jeans and a blouse, but on the next page she's in a sweater and skirt. Sloppy writing and even sloppier editing. She empties her bank accounts, runs, but still uses her credit card? The cop breaks into her studio apartment to steal her phone, knowing she's there sleeping and he has a lit cigarette in his mouth? Yeah, just bad.