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Mark of the Founder: A litRPG Saga: Beastborne, Book 1

Mark of the Founder: A litRPG Saga: Beastborne, Book 1

byJames T. Callum
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The Guy with an Opinion
5.0 out of 5 starsAwesome LITRPG with a bit of everything that ties together really well.
Reviewed in the United States on July 6, 2020
Beastborne is a fantastic book that starts off slowly and ramps up to one of the best adventures I've read in a long time.

The MC doesn't start off knowing everything about a the "game" experience, something he gradually gets into but not annoyingly so like those who are in denial for the first 20+ chapters (ugh). We see a MC who gradually builds himself up, often with the help of his party, and you constantly get glimpses of his potential all through out the book. There is no overpowered MC, only someone trying to make best of what could have been a very, very bad intro (read the sample, you'll know what I'm talking about). It's about halfway through that you realize how bad it could have really been, and this grand over-arching mystery with his ties to the villain definitely will have you drawing wild conspiracies about what could be.

Its this constant thought provocation and the wonderful world building, amazing characters, and cool creatures that will have you reading non-stop through this book. The fact that the book is also so polished especially as a first time author has you really appreciate the 1000+ pages.

I don't often write high praise for books, often with portal fantasy or litrpg books there are enough rough edges that there is a critique here or there but other than a hand full of typos (in a 1000+ page book no less), I would say this is a really well done book and would stand up there with some of the big name established authors. I will definatley add this author to my "must read" list and really look forward to the next book.
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Lunasmeow
3.0 out of 5 starsGood story, idiot MC.
Reviewed in the United States on October 12, 2020
It gets summed up with one simple example:

"Hal was about to answer but her use of the phrase “hulk out” brought him up short. That wasn’t a common phrase. Not here. It was back on Earth, however. And judging by the curious glances Ashera and Elora shot the Dragoon, they didn’t get the reference."

This is an ENTIRE PARAGRAPH of the MC noticing something VERY strange... and THEY DON'T EVEN ASK ABOUT IT!

The excuse given? The main character doesn't want to pry into her past. Really? Asking her how she knows about the Hulk is sensitive information now?

If you wanted to keep a secret about why she knows it, you DON'T have the MC notice! You let her say it, most readers breeze by it, and you use it as foreshadowing. You DO NOT have the MC notice, then just not ask because "that would be an invasion of privacy". It isn't an invasion of privacy to ASK A SIMPLE QUESTION. You're ASKING her, not sneakily reading her diary to discover her secrets. ESPECIALLY when she knows the one secret the MC has to keep from EVERYONE or risk getting killed - or worse - by the big bad of the story. She can have his secret, but he can't ask a reasonable question about how she knows Earth's cultural references? If we, the readers shouldn't know yet - which is the ONLY reason for this action - then DON'T DRAW ATTENTION TO IT.

Well written story in every other respect, utter IMBECILE of a main character.
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The Guy with an Opinion
5.0 out of 5 stars Awesome LITRPG with a bit of everything that ties together really well.
Reviewed in the United States on July 6, 2020
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Beastborne is a fantastic book that starts off slowly and ramps up to one of the best adventures I've read in a long time.

The MC doesn't start off knowing everything about a the "game" experience, something he gradually gets into but not annoyingly so like those who are in denial for the first 20+ chapters (ugh). We see a MC who gradually builds himself up, often with the help of his party, and you constantly get glimpses of his potential all through out the book. There is no overpowered MC, only someone trying to make best of what could have been a very, very bad intro (read the sample, you'll know what I'm talking about). It's about halfway through that you realize how bad it could have really been, and this grand over-arching mystery with his ties to the villain definitely will have you drawing wild conspiracies about what could be.

Its this constant thought provocation and the wonderful world building, amazing characters, and cool creatures that will have you reading non-stop through this book. The fact that the book is also so polished especially as a first time author has you really appreciate the 1000+ pages.

I don't often write high praise for books, often with portal fantasy or litrpg books there are enough rough edges that there is a critique here or there but other than a hand full of typos (in a 1000+ page book no less), I would say this is a really well done book and would stand up there with some of the big name established authors. I will definatley add this author to my "must read" list and really look forward to the next book.
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Core
5.0 out of 5 stars The Main Character. . .
Reviewed in the United States on August 23, 2020
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The main character is so pitifully incompetent, that the book has been a turn off so far, I'm only 135 pages in.. but I'm doing a lot of "eye rolling".. even after he gains intelligence, um, he needs to invest some more in that stat, is all I can say.

That being said, I'm only part way into the book. I plan on keeping on, b/c the world is interesting in and of itself. I love the #Isekai genre when its got a bit of creativity to it.. so I'll keep reading. I just hope things start panning out in a better direction. I mean, from rock bottom you can only go up, you'd think... so I really really hope the MC is going to grow a little bit. At least learn not to shoot himself in the proverbial foot.

Right now, I'm ranking this story at "2 stars"..

*Update*
So my knee jerk reaction to the book, was 2 star rating, because.. I didn't like the main character. He seemed about as capable & smart as a box full of kitten shaped rocks. Anyways, after making it to the end. I really really liked the Authors imagination. The story turned out to be a real romp. The world building though is by far the best of any #Isekai stories I have read to date.

I feel things moved weirdly pace wise.. like.. most of the details were filled in so it wasn't too bad. .. the pace just seemed horribly slow sometimes, & then it would just "warp forward" kind of.. I grew used to it, though it was trying at times.

Also the author went all "grimgar dark" a couple of times(I hate the grimgar series so it was really really trying for me, like eating a piece of rotten food).. one where he killed off a character he just introduced. (yeah that really made a not positive impact on me) If the author was trying to get empathy out of me as a reader.. well I was a little wore out by that point in the story, and after learning that a WHOLE TOWN of people had died in the book, so.. one more after that I could care less really. It was like a chess piece was taken off the game board. I was just annoyed if anything.

Then another was this fight scene, that just drug on.. and on... and ON.. I was like "Jesus how long is this going to go on?" after all he's the main character, the book goes on, I can predict what was going to happen. BUT it was a nice twist once it was all said & done. And really it was interesting how the author used this set up, later on in the story.. very creative.

Another scene really did get some empathy out of me. A female character was being harmed, she had just been "born" into this world.. & I hate incompetent leaders.. or men.. like.. "Utter incompetence" I really disliked how "Hal" the main character "hum hauled" around in the fight allowing his new companion to get figuratively fastened with a screw. I can understand how this scene set the stage for round 2 of the fight.. but it was definitely a tough arc to deal with.

I can see myself buying book 2 if it continues with this kind of character growth & it comes out sometimes REAL REAL SOON.. while this fire is still lit in me for this world.

TL;DR This is one of the best Western Isekai stories I have read to date. I am glad I took the chance & bought it. Like everyone says, it starts out slow (God does it start out so slow).. but by the end of the book, you'll really appreciate, or be overwhelmed by the "World shard system".. but hopefully find it equally cool. I know I loved the world & characters.. & Vorax. And the little Koblins.. I really grew to like the koblin creatures.. I don't know if the author picked this up from some Japanese DND or what.. ?
If you like the Isekai genre.. (One of the best things Japan has created).. Buy this book. Enjoy the story.
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Lunasmeow
3.0 out of 5 stars Good story, idiot MC.
Reviewed in the United States on October 12, 2020
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It gets summed up with one simple example:

"Hal was about to answer but her use of the phrase “hulk out” brought him up short. That wasn’t a common phrase. Not here. It was back on Earth, however. And judging by the curious glances Ashera and Elora shot the Dragoon, they didn’t get the reference."

This is an ENTIRE PARAGRAPH of the MC noticing something VERY strange... and THEY DON'T EVEN ASK ABOUT IT!

The excuse given? The main character doesn't want to pry into her past. Really? Asking her how she knows about the Hulk is sensitive information now?

If you wanted to keep a secret about why she knows it, you DON'T have the MC notice! You let her say it, most readers breeze by it, and you use it as foreshadowing. You DO NOT have the MC notice, then just not ask because "that would be an invasion of privacy". It isn't an invasion of privacy to ASK A SIMPLE QUESTION. You're ASKING her, not sneakily reading her diary to discover her secrets. ESPECIALLY when she knows the one secret the MC has to keep from EVERYONE or risk getting killed - or worse - by the big bad of the story. She can have his secret, but he can't ask a reasonable question about how she knows Earth's cultural references? If we, the readers shouldn't know yet - which is the ONLY reason for this action - then DON'T DRAW ATTENTION TO IT.

Well written story in every other respect, utter IMBECILE of a main character.
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Zattara89
3.0 out of 5 stars its a good book but its also a bit too mutch on the Harem side
Reviewed in the United States on July 9, 2020
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its a good book. good story, nice leveling system and world building. but then we have the characters girls, girls. the guys we do see are those that have small roles to play in the story. again its a good book so read it but if you are like me and dont like harem be warned.
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C11Link
5.0 out of 5 stars An excellent blend of RPG, Mystery, Intrigue, Action, Character Development and Survival
Reviewed in the United States on December 13, 2021
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The blend of colorful characters, complex storylines, and a clear vision for the future of the series with by the many hooks set within the first book, is complimented with excellent writing, humor, worldbuilding, systems, and action, lots and lots of action.

Definitely give this book a try. It's really remarkable to read a book that clearly has a plan, and equally surprising plot twists. So many book series out there feel retconned later in the series to force depth that never existed, so it's truly refreshing to read and know each hint leads to something meaningful and logical.
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JArchibald
5.0 out of 5 stars Positively amazing!
Reviewed in the United States on October 24, 2020
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So not only do you have an incredibly deep and unique world here, you have one of the best character lists I have ever seen in a book one.

Just the different races alone are amazing. Elves, teifling, dwarves, goblins, beastmen of various types(does, cats, and others).

There is one special group in this book thoigh. The Koblins. These incredibly cute and funny that act like a cross between a young Gizmo from the movie gremlins, and baby Groot, crossed with looking like a masked baby Yoda. With names like Lootlox Bangpants, and Jabkix Pigeonpecs these creatures are they best monsters ever. Ever I say. I want a Lootlox backpack!!
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Daniel Monahan
5.0 out of 5 stars Excellent book , a must read for litrpg fans
Reviewed in the United States on July 22, 2020
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This was an incredible story. I really enjoyed the book and look forward to reading the next one when it comes out. this book has incredible value for cost, it is well written with great. Hamster growth and world building. The fight and dog mechanics are well done and the story is interesting, looking forward to book 2.
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unknown
5.0 out of 5 stars Florking good!
Reviewed in the United States on July 24, 2020
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Well written and intriguing story. There are multiple genres that are blended together, but not so much that they over powered on another. Well edited, with only a few mistakes (when the name "Vorax" appears randomly, don't worry, the actual introduction occurs a paragraph later.) My only critique is that the MC gets a very cool class mechanic, and while at first realizes, and acknowledges just how much...potential... it has, the MC's focus actually kinda peters out after a bit, and unrealistically doesn't seem to have taken it to heart just how pivotal it is to his survival that he diligently...expands... his collection. The actual act of consciously increasing his unique repertoire is kinda shelved, unrealistically.
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Daniel
5.0 out of 5 stars Amazing
Reviewed in the United States on July 8, 2020
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I enjoyed the book thoroughly and I await the next book, this literally is the beginning of a new journey that I would love to read.
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sc209105
5.0 out of 5 stars Great story
Reviewed in the United States on January 5, 2021
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I found the story was very good. MC was very down to earth and not ridiculous OP. World the MC was in was dangerous and believable in relation to this along with his maturing in the environment. I also enjoyed the other characters and was easily reading the book and wishing it would continue. Looking forward to the next installment!
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