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Repetitive to the point of predictable
Reviewed in the United States on July 19, 2021
I was really loving the first book in this series but it just keeps going downhill. First, if you set the mains up as the best of the best team of mercs ever, why do you write them as weak dummies who couldn't defeat of outwit a scout troupe? Attacks coming from all sides, no security measures, no guard rotation and splitting up whenever. Worse they finally grow a brain cells and set up a mandatory check in when one heads off to surely be captured, and THEY SLEEP THROUGH IT.
Which is why every book ends on the same damn cliffhanger-- one of the men is dead, dying or captured.
Yeah that happens when you're idiots who don't take basic precautions against your enemies and now she's pregnant and apparently already in crisis, again not a shock as they do literally nothing to protect her or themselves.
Their plan is to go back to the demon world where the insane king tried to rape her, which is a horrible plan that immediately goes wrong because it's not a plan but a stupid idea. And I am a reader who hates sudden pregnancies, especially when their under active attack, so if you want me to keep reading, you gotta give me one hell of a story not just explain it all away with its prophesied.