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Var (The Omega Collective Book 1)

Var (The Omega Collective Book 1)

byMina Carter
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Danea55
4.0 out of 5 starsAn omegaverse story I actually liked.
Reviewed in the United States on September 9, 2021
Var is book 1 in a new collaborative series, The Omega Collective, by Mina Carter and Susan Hayes, and it is an 'omegaverse' style story. The book is written in third person omniscient from both leads' perspectives.

To be fair, I'm not huge on the omegaverse genre, but I did enjoy the book, so hats off to the ladies for managing that. The book takes place in the wake of the hostile takeover of earth by an alien species (Tolath) whose purpose is to use human females for breeding, since they don't have enough of their own (some weird genetic quirk). One faction of the Tolath did the initial invasion, but they then proceeded to abuse their new subjects, so a different faction has come and is finishing up the process of kicking them out (read that as killing them off). So this new group is at least not the monsters of the old regime, but the humans don't know that. What the Tolath don't know, is that their genetic tinkering failed to make humans docile like it has for previous species. This series will be about the two species learning to live with one another, because at this point, neither has a choice.

Var was probably a good starting character, honestly. He wasn't royalty or nobility, so it was easier to get to know both him and his species through him than it would have been if they had started the series with, say, the overseer. I actually ended up liking him a good bit by the end of the book. Leia was a mom desperate to save her daughter, and brave enough to literally anything to succeed. I think making her an older woman probably helped start the series too, because she had some wisdom to go with her drive and it served to educate the Tolath.

This book is full of hulking alien warriors, fearsome human females, lots of action, a good heaping of steam, and some eye opening moments for some rather surprised males. A good read that won't take you long and will make you curious about the next book.
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2.0 out of 5 starsShort, with little development for a new series
Reviewed in the United States on April 29, 2021
As a big big Mina Carter and Susan Hayes fan, this is particularly disappointing for a new series.

The H--virtually one note. Mostly he shouts MINE alot, and threatens to "punish" the h. Oh, and by punish, he means spanking in case you need clarity. He's quite the hunk o burnin' love, but otherwise, we learn little about him. He speaks intelligently and fluidly to others, but shares little besides declarative statements and threats with the h.

The h--she's a bit older, thankfully. No virgins! But I can see them coming, for sure, along with some secret babies. She does perform some TSTL acts, which are not endearing.

The plot--pretty spare. Because this book is so short, there's little world building, and not much character development of the different players. There's mostly sex. However, there's such an insta-love vibe that there's virtually no real connection between the H and the h.

Both authors are really accomplished, and have written terrific stories and series. It's unclear where this is going, and doesn't entice this reader to the next story. Read the first volume of Mina Carter's Lathar series to see how a new series is supposed to kick off.
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2.0 out of 5 stars Short, with little development for a new series
Reviewed in the United States on April 29, 2021
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As a big big Mina Carter and Susan Hayes fan, this is particularly disappointing for a new series.

The H--virtually one note. Mostly he shouts MINE alot, and threatens to "punish" the h. Oh, and by punish, he means spanking in case you need clarity. He's quite the hunk o burnin' love, but otherwise, we learn little about him. He speaks intelligently and fluidly to others, but shares little besides declarative statements and threats with the h.

The h--she's a bit older, thankfully. No virgins! But I can see them coming, for sure, along with some secret babies. She does perform some TSTL acts, which are not endearing.

The plot--pretty spare. Because this book is so short, there's little world building, and not much character development of the different players. There's mostly sex. However, there's such an insta-love vibe that there's virtually no real connection between the H and the h.

Both authors are really accomplished, and have written terrific stories and series. It's unclear where this is going, and doesn't entice this reader to the next story. Read the first volume of Mina Carter's Lathar series to see how a new series is supposed to kick off.
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2.0 out of 5 stars Alpha to Omega: You're Mine! Mine! Mine!
Reviewed in the United States on April 27, 2021
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I like Mina Carter's work, usually. The issue, for me, was no real character development so no real connection between H and h. Insta sex scenes with constant threats of 'i will punish you' if you don't obey and of course there was the 'i must punish you now' spanking. Oh yes, and lets not forget more of 'Mine'! This book was borderline juvenile writing in places. It's a pity that the authors didn't focus more on the story line, the premise of which was quite ok but to many intimate moments with not enough connection detracted from it.
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Danea55
4.0 out of 5 stars An omegaverse story I actually liked.
Reviewed in the United States on September 9, 2021
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Var is book 1 in a new collaborative series, The Omega Collective, by Mina Carter and Susan Hayes, and it is an 'omegaverse' style story. The book is written in third person omniscient from both leads' perspectives.

To be fair, I'm not huge on the omegaverse genre, but I did enjoy the book, so hats off to the ladies for managing that. The book takes place in the wake of the hostile takeover of earth by an alien species (Tolath) whose purpose is to use human females for breeding, since they don't have enough of their own (some weird genetic quirk). One faction of the Tolath did the initial invasion, but they then proceeded to abuse their new subjects, so a different faction has come and is finishing up the process of kicking them out (read that as killing them off). So this new group is at least not the monsters of the old regime, but the humans don't know that. What the Tolath don't know, is that their genetic tinkering failed to make humans docile like it has for previous species. This series will be about the two species learning to live with one another, because at this point, neither has a choice.

Var was probably a good starting character, honestly. He wasn't royalty or nobility, so it was easier to get to know both him and his species through him than it would have been if they had started the series with, say, the overseer. I actually ended up liking him a good bit by the end of the book. Leia was a mom desperate to save her daughter, and brave enough to literally anything to succeed. I think making her an older woman probably helped start the series too, because she had some wisdom to go with her drive and it served to educate the Tolath.

This book is full of hulking alien warriors, fearsome human females, lots of action, a good heaping of steam, and some eye opening moments for some rather surprised males. A good read that won't take you long and will make you curious about the next book.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Sci-fi, fated mates, and a new “world” to experience
Reviewed in the United States on April 27, 2021
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Drawn in from the very first sentence, I saw myself and all of the strong women I know in Leia. When these aliens think earth women will be subservient and obedient they have another thing coming. Var is one scary MF but he proves to Leia that not all of the Tolath are like the original aliens that invaded Earth, who sent omegas into hiding afraid for their lives.

This new “world” is set up in glimpses. First the village where Leia is found by Var. Var and his air bike. The Citadel where The Lord Overseer Tane and Var live. And because we’re not force fed the facts of the changes that have taken place the story flows well. I call it the “movie effect”, I can see the action in my mind. Oh, and there are just enough sexy times to spice up the tale. I won’t call it romance exactly because it is more like instinct taking over.

This is a great start to a new series, sexy sci-fi at it’s best. Can’t wait for Rath!
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Sydney M Neblett
5.0 out of 5 stars Purr only for me
Reviewed in the United States on April 27, 2021
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Holy wow! This book is phenomenal! I knew when these two authors collaborated together that the book was going to be amazing, but they have far surpassed my expectations. I love the characters! The human omegas are nothing like these aliens have seen before, and they sure give their alphas a run for their money. Var is my ideal of the perfect alpha, tender with his mate, but ready to throat punch anyone who looks at him funny. And Leia has a strength of character that made me cheer her on throughout. I can’t wait to read her daughter’s story, I can’t imagine her being meek and mild and she is sure to make life interesting for her alpha. The story itself was fantastic! I enjoyed the excitement and danger the authors brought into the depth of the romance, it kept the story moving and made the situations seem more realistic. The authors built this entire world full of multiple story opportunities with each new alpha we meet, I can only hope that the series will continue for a long time to come because I am hooked.
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Jennifer
4.0 out of 5 stars An enjoyable omegaverse romance.
Reviewed in the United States on May 2, 2021
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I really enjoyed this story, and wish it had been longer. The world building was vivid, with this culture clash of alien invaders who expected the conquered population to be genuinely submissive, and the human omegas who are willing to do almost anything to destroy the aliens who took everything away from them. The sub-plot of the clan who initially invaded having Earth taken away from them because of war crimes and mismanagement was a nice touch, since the aliens there now are not the ones who committed the atrocities, but there is no difference in the eyes of the humans. That neatly sidestepped a common problem with alien invasion romances, where the hero is a colonizing villain and the author has to try to convince the reader that he is worthy of being a romantic hero. My reading experience is that I am usually convinced in that scenario that the heroine ending up with the hero is a tragedy, not a Happy Ever After. This setup cleverly sidestepped most of that deeply problematic issue. The whole story worked like that in multiple instances. I also really liked that the human omegas were so different from omegas from any other conquered worlds in that they were all naturally fighters and were not going to tolerate mistreatment. These authors understand quite well that the best romance novel narrative arc involves a heroine in a vulnerable position overcoming and defeating the patriarchy in her own life. In order for any romance novel to be satisfying for the reader, that needs to be the central moral lesson.
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Jessica N
5.0 out of 5 stars Will she ever accept Var and his claim fully?
Reviewed in the United States on May 4, 2021
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Var is the first book in the Omega Collective Series. Leia is on a mission to find her daughter and she’s willing to do anything, even be claimed by the alien raiders for their help. But Leia is shocked at how A’varen treats her, and how she responds to him. But will she ever accept Var and his claim fully?

Oh my! This book was well written for anyone new to Omegaverse books, as it wasn’t too heavy, but had enough nods to the central ideas! I was completely hooked on Leia and Var’s story from the very beginning! I adored Leia - I loved her sass and drive and how she wasn’t afraid to stand for her and other women’s rights. She helped a lot with fixing miscommunication issues and I liked seeing some of her omega side come out, too. Var was all alpha male, possessive and dominant, but I liked that he let Leia be a little bit sassy and supporter her strength. They had a lot to learn from each other, which I also enjoyed reading about! There’s definitely a connection and bond that forms between both characters with some steamy and passionate moments, too. I liked how this book kind of set the stage, too, for this new world that the authors have created! I loved their creativity and imagination and I was so excited that these two authors collaborated together! I am excited to read more from this series!
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Tink
2.0 out of 5 stars Nearly abandoned this one
Reviewed in the United States on May 17, 2021
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This is definitely not what I've come to expect of Mina Carter. It's truly disappointing. A female lead, who, while standing up for herself within her limits, comes across as bland and a bit weak. The male lead doesn't seem to have anything going for him beyond not being quite as violent as others of his species. The plot leads us into a second book into the series, but honestly doesn't have the spice to carry my interest into reading it.

This book was nearly a DNF, but given my love of Mina Carter's work, I felt I owed it my full effort to finish. I did, though I've chosen to not go farther with the series.
Definitely consider both authors' other work, as, in my experience, it's vastly superior.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Remarkable
Reviewed in the United States on January 4, 2022
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I've stayed away from stories like this because I feared it would be a lot of bdsm. That was sooo foolish of me. 😮😮 . Instead, I found a worthwhile fantasy that stoked my imagination and tantalized my mind.
Earth was invaded by aliens. A chemical was released into the atmosphere changing the female population, some became Omega's, a condition necessary to carry the offspring of the aliens. But they were abused and repeatedly raped, those who found them, nursed them to no avail. The remaining Omega's went into hiding helped by other females who were unaffected by the chemicals (known as beta's).
Leia is an Omega. She came out of hiding to request help to find her daughter (also an Omega) who was captured during a raid. But before she can reach the trading post she's accosted by an Alpha who'd been searching for Omega's to replace the one he killed.
Var is the alien high lord's shield. He's worked hard n long to achieve that rank. Today was supposed to be a day of relaxation when he's summoned to stop the Alpha. Her cries of distress n her scent awaken his inner beast as he races to her rescue. (Mine he repeats) as both Alphas fight over her. The other Alpha sensing defeat tried to crawl away but Var prevented him from retreating beating him to death for touching his female.
This was an interesting n remarkable story as certain facts are revealed n revelations come about to change the aliens perspectives of the human Omega's.
Definitely a worthy read, in my opinion. Kudos to the author.
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jcrsmash
1.0 out of 5 stars No choice for the 'omegas'
Reviewed in the United States on May 3, 2021
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When a book is wrote as a woman not having a choice in the life she has it needs to be wrote. I thought this was a lot like the lathar. Ya they are barbaric but for the most part women get a choice. I am not into free choice being circumvented even in a fantasy novel. A little warning would be nice. I have almost all of Mina Carters books but here lately they are leaning toward the no choice get with program or be punished. No way
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