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Reviewed in the United States on August 13, 2021
I’m abandoning this series at the 9% mark of the first book, and during those 9% have been wondering of they were written by AI with no editor.
The characters are flat, the story is missing huge chunks and transitions from one series of events to the next and it is - overall - void of storytelling.
If it was written by a human, your proofreaders and editor(s) failed you. The premise is good, the execution is lacking. I’m sorry your tribe didn’t do a better job of supporting you.