Amazon.com: Customer reviews: He Who Fights with Monsters 3: A LitRPG Adventure (He Who Fights with Monsters, Book 3)

Bewarned, Lacks the polish of the First Two

Reviewed in the United States on September 7, 2021

While the first two were great, this has yet to be polished to the same standard. Just a few pages in and the amount of errors is...very off-putting. If you don't mind the repeated words, odd syntax and bad grammar go for it. I'm already regretting purchasing this on faith based off the other two books and not borrowing it with Kindle Unlimited. They really rushed this book through editing.

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Bewarned, Lacks the polish of the First Two

Reviewed in the United States on September 7, 2021

52 people found this helpful

MitsWraith

Great story

Reviewed in the United States on September 7, 2021

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It was good but the ending is terrible, and I hate cliffhangers

xicsess

Reviewed in the United States on September 8, 2021

Gotta be honest I loved the first two books as adventure combined with slice of life with a touch of intrigue. This book takes that and elevates it to a new level one that spans realities. Personally, I could do without it. I also didn't enjoy that the last 10% of the book was a bunch of inter-dimensional politics. Having large forces as mystery would have been far better. The ending for me was a huge disappointment in direction.

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Scott Goates

So many typos.

Reviewed in the United States on September 10, 2021

I don't know if they thought that they would publish this without an editor and have the Kindle readers edit it, but this is awful. There are SO MANY TYPOS. I am 10% in and have already reported at least 15. And these aren't like a missing comma, but words are in there wrong, there's extra words, and my daughter who is further along than me said there is one section that says, "delete for Kindle book" in the actual text. Also the point of view of this book is not consistent with the other two. Instead of being third person limited, it is third person omniscient and he drops almost all the LitRPG wording. The whole thing reads like a rough draft. I'm so disappointed. I was really looking forward to this book, but not this way. I think I will put it back on the shelf and hope it gets fixed at some point.

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Great story and 8 Epilogue chapters!

Reviewed in the United States on February 5, 2022

Another excellent book in this series. I love how the characters grow and progress. I especially like that while at times quite powerful, for his level, with indications of becoming even more so, he is not overpowered and he recognizes his own limitations.

Of course, that rarely deters him from pushing boundaries and getting into trouble. Though, as he adapts to his new world and gains trusted friends, his actions are now a little less 'poke the bear', sometimes.

I won't spoil the story and will just note that the Epilogue was eight chapters! Several questions are answered, new questions and characters are introduced, and now the stage is set for book 4. I am seriously excited about the next book!

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Shirtaloon does it a 3rd time

Robert B Baucom

Reviewed in the United States on September 16, 2021

Just finished book 3. It is much less convoluted than book one and two. But it is awesome. Jason's snarky quips are still there, so good that I sent out the conversation of his quips to other people. Even if they have not read the series. Looking forward to book 4. Jason and team mist fight the cult and get strong enough to stop this one action. The dialogue between the teammates. Just awesome.
Heres what i wrote after reading the first 40 pages.
I have to say. He who fights with monsters 3. I am going back to book two now. I've read book one twice. When book two came out. So I'm pretty familiar with it. I hope. There is just so much depth to what has happened in book two. I'm trying to remember all the cast, and all the intertwined machinations that have gone forth in book two. Love the series.

So looking forward to book 4!

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Charles Daniel Christopher

Two Deaths And Counting

Reviewed in the United States on May 27, 2022

It is said, that cats have nine lives a piece. Perhaps Jason Asano is a type of cat, as he has embarked upon a second with the first novel of this series and has held the possibility of another life since starting his second life. All of which is fortunate; since he fights monsters and dying is more likely than not.

This novel, and the series of which it is a part, may appeal to fans of the Dungeon Core, Body/Spirit Cultivation, and the wider Fantasy genres; as well as to those who enjoy playing RPGs.

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Clint Young

KU Review

Reviewed in the United States on October 1, 2021

“This was a fun book. I am glad that I read it. You should try it too.”

I am not going to share my reasoning, thoughts on the book, or any opinions that would influence your decision to read it. I am simply saying that I liked it. I would like you to read it and make your own decision. After all, you are a much better judge of what you will like than anyone here.

I will happily discuss the book with you on Goodreads if you are so inclined. As always, I am open to debates and arguments, but also vain enough to seek acknowledgement, so feel free to roast me or applaud my efforts. Either is acceptable, because if you are paying attention to me then you are at least considering the book. And THAT my friends is exactly why you see my comments here.

Cheers

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Great Book and Series!

Reviewed in the United States on September 27, 2021

The sheer jaw-dropping spectacle of events, powers, characters, history, beings, and snark that is presented in these pages leaves me giddy to read more. The team has that excellent camaraderie that comes only from working with and trusting each other, readily swapping snappy comebacks with shielding exposed mates, and everyone suffering through their wins - and losses. The way things ended in this book leaves me on the edge of my seat for the next book: can’t wait. Highly recommended! (17+ for depth)

Rick

Great addition

Reviewed in the United States on February 7, 2022

This book, this author and the story are so in depth and well crafted I find myself immersed and struggling to communicate how well the shortie has done. Truly a unique tale on the genre with a story so well fleshed out that it boggles the mind. This is a universe of such complexity. The characters, their personalities and the dialog are so enjoyable. Each character is unique. To put it simply the book is engaging engaging interesting adventurous and even funny. All the hallmarks elements of an amazing read.