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The Guild's Demands: A Young Adult LitRPG Fantasy (Adventures on Brad Book 7)

The Guild's Demands: A Young Adult LitRPG Fantasy (Adventures on Brad Book 7)

byTao Wong
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Daniel A. Womack
5.0 out of 5 starsThe team struggle to find right place for them....
Reviewed in the United States on February 8, 2022
Writing this after book 9 has been read.

So originally loved all books in this series. Still love all the books in the series, This arc is about Daniel and his sacrifice. This specific book is just about finding the right place for his team and him so that he won't be used and abused by those considered "better" than him.

This is not a long story however it does tell its tale with good pacing and giving us new characters to interact with as the story goes. Tao Wong the only thing that I wish had been is a bit more side character development but other than that enjoyable ride for those reading this.
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3.0 out of 5 starsNot enough. Not nearly enough.
Reviewed in the United States on December 27, 2021
This is book 7 of the series, and it has been a really good series up until now. The premise is great, the story setup was weak but has been overcome. And, unfortunately, this series is struggling to compete with the end of the System books, the beginning of however-many spinoff series, and whatever else Tao Wong is doing with his time.

Sadly, what he is doing is obviously NOT working on the Brad series.

The book is 146 pages long. The earlier books were 240 or more pages long. The next two books are listed as being in the 170 page range. So for the series that isn't available on KU but has to be bought individually, we get less? (Probably doesn't mean anything to you if you're not on KU, but for those of us that are, this is kind of irritating.)

What's more, you make sacrifices when you shorten a book like this. There's very little side-story, no "other character arcs," no humor. Just "the team dropped back to 3 people and went here and did this and then that and the bad guy appeared and ..."

This is not the kind of "story" I want to read. This is not the kind of writing I have come to expect from the "Tao Wong" name. And this is certainly not the sort of thing I'm willing to spend any more money on. I definitely know, now, that when I see "Tao Wong" on a new publication, I have to make an extra check - is this a crappy "novella" in disguise, or a legitimate full-length novel full of the quality writing that I'm used to?

If you've read this far: don't buy this book. Very little happens. Basically, the 3 amigos are forced to join a guild due to pressure from a different guild. There is one significant battle scene, where our hero learns that his Gift can be used as a weapon, and kills the baddie with it. At the end of the story, they're in a guild with a new team, and a few new levels (which don't mean anything in this series anyway), still grinding the Porthos and Athos dungeons. You can skip it entirely and infer what you missed based on back-references in the next issue, if there is one.

Notably, what's NOT in this tale is humor, or the grittiness that TW normally brings to the page. This is the "dehydrated" version of a Tao Wong story. And it has a much in common with the earlier books as powdered eggs has with real eggs.
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3.0 out of 5 stars Not enough. Not nearly enough.
Reviewed in the United States on December 27, 2021
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This is book 7 of the series, and it has been a really good series up until now. The premise is great, the story setup was weak but has been overcome. And, unfortunately, this series is struggling to compete with the end of the System books, the beginning of however-many spinoff series, and whatever else Tao Wong is doing with his time.

Sadly, what he is doing is obviously NOT working on the Brad series.

The book is 146 pages long. The earlier books were 240 or more pages long. The next two books are listed as being in the 170 page range. So for the series that isn't available on KU but has to be bought individually, we get less? (Probably doesn't mean anything to you if you're not on KU, but for those of us that are, this is kind of irritating.)

What's more, you make sacrifices when you shorten a book like this. There's very little side-story, no "other character arcs," no humor. Just "the team dropped back to 3 people and went here and did this and then that and the bad guy appeared and ..."

This is not the kind of "story" I want to read. This is not the kind of writing I have come to expect from the "Tao Wong" name. And this is certainly not the sort of thing I'm willing to spend any more money on. I definitely know, now, that when I see "Tao Wong" on a new publication, I have to make an extra check - is this a crappy "novella" in disguise, or a legitimate full-length novel full of the quality writing that I'm used to?

If you've read this far: don't buy this book. Very little happens. Basically, the 3 amigos are forced to join a guild due to pressure from a different guild. There is one significant battle scene, where our hero learns that his Gift can be used as a weapon, and kills the baddie with it. At the end of the story, they're in a guild with a new team, and a few new levels (which don't mean anything in this series anyway), still grinding the Porthos and Athos dungeons. You can skip it entirely and infer what you missed based on back-references in the next issue, if there is one.

Notably, what's NOT in this tale is humor, or the grittiness that TW normally brings to the page. This is the "dehydrated" version of a Tao Wong story. And it has a much in common with the earlier books as powdered eggs has with real eggs.
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Eric H. Bott
2.0 out of 5 stars Getting Lazy
Reviewed in the United States on January 19, 2022
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Tao Wong has written excellent books and series in the past. The earliest books in this series were generally excellent. Now, not so much. He's gotten lazy, and is essentially writing novelettes, and selling them as novels. In addition to getting poor words/$ with his latest books, he's getting extremely lazy with his plots as well. Take this book, for instance. We get The Big Reveal, the central ethical dilemma faced by the main protagonist. Yet the consequences of that are "explored" by a banal diatribe form a new character, who hasn't yet been developed with any moral or ethical exposition to speak of. The main protagonist apparently takes the [short, not particularly insightful] verbal input as absolution, and in about 5 sentences, the central ethical dilemma of the main character just evaporates. Oh, yeah, the other important protagonists in the series witness the dilemma, and the practical consequences of it (which bears strongly on their likely survival and well-being), and together voice maybe 10 sentences about it, and then seem to let it go. The reader is left feeling particularly cheated, as the "novel" seems to just die with a whimper a chapter later.

Oh, if this were just a single aberration in his repertoire! But, no, we lately have the author also writing and offering at nearly outrageous $/word, multiple "short stories", any of which would be hard pressed to fill a comic book's worth of story line.

Good grief, author-- you have written 10x better stories than this, and have given far better value in your earlier books. Readers be warned!
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Katherine
1.0 out of 5 stars So short that I find it lacking!
Reviewed in the United States on December 27, 2021
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I love this series, it’s the first book series that introduced me to tao wings writing but this book makes me sad. It was still well written and all the plot points were there that makes me crave more of the story. Tao wong basically said he make very little from these books so I get that he might be rushing a bit but still. Your avid readers want more.

Unfortunately the story lacked substance… there was no meat to the story. There were a total of 8 meaningful conversations and events that all lasted about two pages long and the rest read like a treatment or outline to a much greater story.

That being said I still enjoyed it, I feel like I can fill in some of the stories based on how well written the characters were before and my assumptions of how they would act in certain situations but some people might not be that creative.

Even the epilogue seemed rushed, we got a very good bit of dialogue from Daniel’s new guild master and a bit of retrospective but than the end was simply Daniel avoided the dungeon for a few weeks before entering it again.

I feel as if it would have been much better to give us some combat from maybe omrak or Asin’s perspective explaining daniels disappearance recent disappearance from the dungeon and end it with them hoping there friend found himself soon and could rejoin them…
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Daniel A. Womack
5.0 out of 5 stars The team struggle to find right place for them....
Reviewed in the United States on February 8, 2022
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Writing this after book 9 has been read.

So originally loved all books in this series. Still love all the books in the series, This arc is about Daniel and his sacrifice. This specific book is just about finding the right place for his team and him so that he won't be used and abused by those considered "better" than him.

This is not a long story however it does tell its tale with good pacing and giving us new characters to interact with as the story goes. Tao Wong the only thing that I wish had been is a bit more side character development but other than that enjoyable ride for those reading this.
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KindleWoman
4.0 out of 5 stars Good Book
Reviewed in the United States on December 26, 2021
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Quality writing and characters that I enjoy reading about. Though considering this book was on preorder for many months I'm disappointed by how short it was
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Reuben Joorst
3.0 out of 5 stars Lacking some substance
Reviewed in the United States on December 27, 2021
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I really enjoyed the previous books but this didn't have any of the things I liked. There was very little dungeon diving and exploration, very little slice of life, not much leveling and it felt like it was only getting started at 85%.
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P. S. Taylor
5.0 out of 5 stars Tao Wong continues to deliver
Reviewed in the United States on February 12, 2022
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Often sequels are not only rehashes of what has come before but not as well written or as exciting.

Tao Wong avoids that trap and delivers unique stories with writing that continues to punch.

I highly recommend this series as a whole and this book in it.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Loved it
Reviewed in the United States on December 28, 2021
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Fast paced page turner with interesting characters that you can instantly root for. The only problem with this series is that the books are way to short lol. I could read them forever and not be bored. I really enjoy most of this Author's books
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R. Gongwer
3.0 out of 5 stars Ok
Reviewed in the United States on January 1, 2022
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Not sure the premise is actually that compelling. How to join a guild…. If you have a gift. Daniel (MC) is very very naive… lol
Story needed more to it so i understand why he marketed to a young audience.
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5.0 out of 5 stars I loved it!
Reviewed in the United States on January 15, 2022
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I am a fan of everything that you write. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next time we get a new book from you.
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