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Disorganized plot line and no continuity!!
Reviewed in the United States on February 7, 2022
I have read the first three books, and obviously the writers haven’t all read each book, since this is a “group” of writers. The main heroine’s eye color has changed from the first book for one thing. Also, events occur without any explanation as to how they could possibly have happened. It’s like several chapters of explanation just was deleted. These writers are now depending on too many sex episodes between the two main characters. It seems like they are doing a copy and paste to fill the pages with the same horrible writing. It seems like there is one good writer who does the main story than some untalented writers copy/paste previous paragraphs to fill in pages. Boring. Choppy story with a heroine who is stupid and useless. If I didn’t have this in an ebook, I would set it on fire. Only thing it is good for. If you can’t get this and the others from the same so-called “authors” for free, don’t waste your money on these! Just ridiculous and stupid!