Top critical review
starting to unravel and come off unhinged
Reviewed in the United States on December 31, 2021
Jason has PTSD bad and yet this went unnoticed somehow by his friends in the magical world; magical friends who can read a person's aura like a google road map with live sat views.
The whole arch-plot of the series is further explained except it makes no sense in its implementation. You open astral spaces on land to cause conflict OR underwater to promote energy transfer in a stealth manner because there are no magic capable sentients underwater ; there is no reason to do both given the Builder level goals (design specifications it turns out.)
And finally the author obviously has problems with govt in OZ, and like every other socialist blame the USA for his countries failures. [aka the author can't stop ragging]