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3.0 out of 5 starsExpected more
Reviewed in the United States on December 29, 2021
I very rarely leave poor reviews, but I had little choice with this book. The typos and missed words were quite hard to ignore. I usually just tap on the report error and put a note in about what is wrong. It got so bad that I felt like an editor by the end of the book.
I was disappointed in the main character and her development throughout the story. The first 75-80% was a lot of whining for an FBI agent. She was in no way someone that I was anxious to read the next story. It was only in the final chapters that it actually picked up, with some well-timed action. Otherwise, the book would consist of so much unnecessary drama. Everything about the book was over the top and unbelievable.
I only went up to a 3rd star due to the last few chapters.
Plot twist comments (spoilers below) :
I don't know what police department can't track one of their own vehicles in this day and age.
Also, what agent with the FBI just runs around doing things on her own? Especially if she has been told her life is in danger and she has a protection detail. Extremely hard to believe, shows the character's selfishness.
