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Started Well. Crashed and burned at about 12%
Reviewed in the United States on February 8, 2022
Okay, I liked the initial set up/work-building. I liked the very first part of the dungeon run. I even liked where the dungeon suddenly evolves and becomes much harder and two of the four party members are quickly killed.
What I emphatically DIDN’T like was how, when the last two party members were fighting the level 99 demon, when they were both level one or less, and they kept having these MASSIVELY long, I’m talking paragraphs or even pages, stretches of back and forth dialogue between them - all while the demon is just… sitting there I guess, politely waiting. It was just dumb. Unbelievable in a way that knocked me out of the story. Sorry, but it was a rookie author mistake, putting that much damn dialogue right in the middle of a life or death fight.